Excellent job! Looks much better than mine too!!
Some minor adjustments:
The PK for Ticket Response is ( Ticket Number, Ticket Response ID ) (in that order). Yes, a PK can have more than attribute / column in it. Ticket Number is also a FK (points to a "parent" table with that attribute as a unique key). Ticket Response ID is not a FK, just part of the PK.
Similarly for Ticket Cancellation, PK will be ( Ticket Number, Ticket Cancellation ID ).
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