sobrien (11/7/2008)
I wasn't being overly critical. I was stating my opinion. I found the article very hard to get through because of the way it was written; therefore, I got nothing out of it. (If you have to read a sentence more than once to figure out what the person is trying to say, then it isn't written properly.)
Sorry to upset you so much. What I meant is that we should try to look beyond the shortcomings in his language skills and try to gain what we can from the article, if anything. We don't want to discourage people investing their own time writing possibly useful articles. Personally, I think you can certainly understand what he is communicating but that is only my opinion...