To each his own, I guess!
To me, your "fix" makes it even harder to read (keeping a joined table on the same line as the first table? eek!) - but either way I'm still more interested in oddities of T-SQL parsing than your formatting preferences 😉
http://poorsql.com for T-SQL formatting: free as in speech, free as in beer, free to run in SSMS or on your version control server - free however you want it.