Jeff Moden (1/22/2011)
I think the abstract is just fine. I don't believe the title matches nor does justice to the abstract or the session, though. Now, after reading the abstract, I get the point as to why the title is what it is, but the purpose of the title is to make people want to take the time to read the abstract.
I agree with Jeff. I've attended this presentation and there's a lot of great content. The title leaves me wondering if it's about writing a resume, if standards for resumes have changed, or something along those lines. Your presentation is much more than that; it's about getting your resume to the top of the stack by doing things beyond showing up to work and doing a good job. The abstract tells that story, the title...not so much.